Wednesday, February 17, 2010
WHO I WAS! Section 1
My father is a tall coolie man and of average body weight, My mother is of mestizo descent. From about the age of five i was taken to Salem, Oregon were i used to live for some couple of months, i am not a born American but love the American's life style. I was attending St. Paul's Anglican school and from the age of five, yah i had to do back a year in infant 1 cause of too much traveling. from about the age of six i realized that school was important and i didn't even had to study and was still number 1 in the class. was usually coming in first in all my classes until standard two hen i fell down way to second place, i felt bad about my self cause i always wanted to be the best and was proud of my past achievements so went back up to first place all the way to standard six. i got the highest in P.S.E within the school and ended up being the valedictorian for graduation. my parents were all proud of me as i was for my self! When i was about the age of nine i was afraid of chucky a evil little doll that kills people, i could see any of his movies cause i wouldn't be able to sleep alone.My happiest moment was when i was about the age of five i was loved by every one, given every thing i wanted and needed. My saddest moment was around the age of nine when my father left, i used to like being with him every were he went i was there with him that's why i used to travel that much.The scariest moment of my life was when i almost drown, i went to the beach for a swim with some of my cousins they were swimming towards dept and i wanted to follow and couldn't swim one of my cousins was with me but he neither couldn't swim i was drowning him and he was drowning me until we finally arrived at shore. My most embarrassing moment was when i copied a school work cause i forgot to do it and it was to be collected and graded sadly the teacher found out and posted the paper in front of the class board for every one to see. My life changing moment was when i first entered high school i changed from being quiet and dedicated to less quiet and more dedicated since i wanted to accomplish my goals i discovered some physical changes and became more mature dealing with issues more seriously that was the time i got my first kiss. My mother was my rock my shoulder she was there and is still here with me she is the one who influenced me to succeed in life to get an education and become some one important in life, she advised me to always do my best in what ever i do! My role model is my father i had always wanted to accomplish many thing he had accomplish thats the main reason i came to c.c.c cause he graduated from that institution as well.
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ReplyDeleteMake sure to correct the grammatical and mechanical errors for your final version of the autobiography. I would want to know more about how your mom and dad have influenced you. YOu said you wanted to accomplish the same things he did, but you don't say what those things are...